Poetry: Student Attempts

I taught my Grade 6 students to write poetry for the first time, this is their work.

Ho! The day comes, my Birthday party
I get huge gifts, smartly
Very annoying, birthday songs
Like a crying baby with big lungs
Better than biscuits with cream 
Pure yellow  like a dream  
Delicious cake 
I bake!
Awesome perfume
With a little fume

Name: 
Ume Aiman

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